Wicked!

India

ENFP-T

Daydreaming and procrastinating more than is healthy.

Writer's block and sleep deprivation are my constant companions.

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[pfp: cover art for "Wild World" by Bastille]

Message to Readers

For mia's #SmilesforSpring contest.

I would really appreciate some title suggestions for this piece :)

Yellow/Pink/Red | #SmilesforSpring1

May 8, 2020

FREE WRITING

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(i)

Her laughter is yellow. 

It's like daffodils and sunflowers and sunny days. Her laughter is joy and cheer; it warms up your heart and brings a smile to your face. 


(ii)

Her touch is pink. 

It's pink like cotton candy and strawberry smoothies and cherry blossoms. 

Her touch is tender and caring and sometimes it's everything you need. She always just knows when you do.


(iii)

Her gaze is red. 

It's the red of blood and chillies and of the fire that blazes within her. It drips with courage and defiance, and it will scorch your soul if she wants it to. 

But sometimes her gaze is the red of roses and cranberries and her favourite velvet dress. It exudes passion and her absolute, undying love. And when she tells you that she loves you, you know that you're very fortunate.
 
I wanted this to be better and longer but it's the middle of the night and I'm tired. 

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10 Comments
  • journal.scribbles

    Wow, this imagery is so good. I visualized each color as I read it.

    Replying: Thank you so much for the comment and well wishes!


    6 months ago
  • black_and_red_ink

    This is a great idea for a poem. Good job :)


    6 months ago
  • BurningMidnightOil

    #apoemaday contest results are finally out! so sorry for the wait!

    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/167701/version/331489


    7 months ago
  • joella

    this is amazing! thanks for all the love on my recent pieces <3


    7 months ago
  • Currently Unavailable

    WOW! I LOVE THIS!!!


    7 months ago
  • mia_:)

    Competition results are up!
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/164768/version/324122


    7 months ago
  • ElsaRee

    Gods! This is beyond description!!! I loved, loved LOVED this!!


    7 months ago
  • Tushar Mandhan

    Q n A answers-
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/163796/version/322545


    7 months ago
  • Dmoral

    Replying: @Wicked!
    no worries! better late than never ;)


    7 months ago
  • Anne Blackwood

    Title suggestions:
    Coloring Her Heart
    Hues of Her Heart
    Vibrant
    Kaleidoscopic Love


    7 months ago