SplatterWriting

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May 5, 2020

PROMPT: Farsick

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have you ever missed something?
Everyone has
but have you ever missed something that you are not aware of?

A grapple of reality
somewhere in the far off future
Or somewhere in the past
the touch of God perhaps?
Your soulmate of which you long for?
maybe it's the hope
To be loved
you don't know

But still

you reach out
You can just barely touch it
until
It's gone
it moves off into a far off place
I miss it
that glimpse
That touch
of that something
That I have been waiting for

i can only wish
That it is out there too,
waiting for me

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4 Comments
  • SplatterWriting

    Thanks, guys! And thank you for the advice @mia_:)
    I will take into account readability next time, I suppose I wanted to mess around with the capitalization in this piece, alternating every line.


    7 months ago
  • mia_:)

    This is really good and thought-provoking! One bit of advice: try to keep your capitalization consistent. If you want to go all lowercase, go for it! Or if you want to stay with regular grammar rules, that's amazing too! You can't go wrong (even a scramble of the two is fine, but it makes it a little confusing to read.) Hope this helps! Great piece!


    7 months ago
  • Juniper

    This is great, nice job!!!


    7 months ago
  • Mishthi Sharma

    Beautiful!!!!
    It appears I have missed many things and I wanna go back to feel them.


    7 months ago