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It's very thought provoking and strong. The piece is beautiful because it can be interpreted in a no. of ways. My interpretation says that we should understand that something which is a nightmare for you can be a daydream for anybody else. Our sufferings should not always be placed above someone else's joy. Also, it perfectly fits in today's scenario.
I think the highlighted line can be elaborated a bit but at the same time it is perfect as it :)
One more thing, it is possible that I didn't interpret this the way the author would have liked but I believe that a great writer is one who can convey more than he himself knows. So you have done a great job!!