addy_24

Canada

Poet
Writer
Bookworm
Daydreamer
Ravenclaw
Chocolate-lover
INTP
14 yrs
Candor
Currently reading "Crooked Kingdom" by Leigh Bardugo

Message to Readers

Feedback and constructive criticism is welcomed. This poem is based on a prompt from the website ThinkWritten. They have very good writing prompts!

Suspicion

July 25, 2020

FREE WRITING

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5 strangers in a room
With nothing but names
Are here to play 
The suspicion game

Suspect number one: Mr. Smith
Impatient, demanding, and looking a bit sore
Can't hold a gun
So now we're down to four

Suspect number two: Mrs. Hardwood
Mother by day, local singer by night
Didn't have the key to the door
For her pockets were light

Suspect number three: Ms. Wanger
Grad student who works at a zoo
Doesn't drive a Caravan
And now it's down to two

Suspect number four and five: Mr. Sparrow and Mr. Lang
Best friends since middle school
Wouldn't dare touch the third person in their trio
So I led them out the door before I looked like a fool

5 strangers in a room 
With nothing but names
Were here to play
The suspicion game

But they forgot one player
The one who brought them all here
The one who led this investigation
Who will now confess with sincere

I murdered Daniel Robinson 
Who is nothing but a name
But it doesn't matter anymore
For I Detective Robert Gray,
Just won the suspicion game









 

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7 Comments
  • Catherine X

    Love the ending and title!


    4 months ago
  • ElsaRee

    NICE!! Keep writing!


    7 months ago
  • Klaiir

    Your creativity is definitely one of a kind


    7 months ago
  • Doodleninja

    niiiiiiice XD I always love the mystery-twist of that the narrator is the actual criminal; excellent job


    7 months ago
  • Mishthi Sharma

    loved it!!!


    7 months ago
  • Juniper

    This is really cool!!! It kept my attention the whole time, nice job!!!


    7 months ago
  • ☆Princess_Grace☆

    This is so creative! I love it!


    7 months ago