Jasmine_K

United States

she/her. 16, i write poetry
if poems disappear they have been submitted to a mag/contest, wish me luck!
est. sometime in 2017
currently waiting for wtw's 3rd golden age

Message to Readers

Don't know what's happening with my writing anymore but, I felt like crying so I wrote this. Feedback is appreciated as usual :)

i don't know what this is, sorry for wasting your time

May 5, 2020

FREE WRITING

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i’ve been trying to find these words all night. i don’t think they’re ever
going to come. there’s just this feeling in the back of my throat so
please don’t take it personal if i don’t fold into you.
i just have a premonition that everything’s gonna crumble soon and
if you start while it’s light out i’ll try my best to wait until you’re far enough to not get hurt.
i promise i’ll learn to breathe again.

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3 Comments
  • BurningMidnightOil

    hey there, it's going to be okay. you know where to find me if you'd like to talk privately. sometimes finding the words to say what you need to say is almost impossible. i get it because i've been there. but you're going to find your thoughts again. take a breath, step back, exhale what's choking you. cry if you need to cry, fall if you need to fall, just make sure you have buckets for those tears and a rope around your ankle to lead you back home. i'm here for you if you need it:)


    7 months ago
  • joella

    sending love <3 I know this feeling


    7 months ago
  • Just_A_Memory

    Beautiful! It's so melancholy... I hope you feel better soon. It's okay to be lost sometimes. If the people around you love you, they'll wait until you're ready. I feel like this a lot. Afraid I'll hurt someone emotionally or otherwise if I don't push them away.

    You'll breathe again.

    Promise.

    -J.A.M.


    7 months ago