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est. march 5, 2020

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桜梅桃李

"i rebel, therefore i exist." ~ albert camus

"be a rainbow in someone's cloud." ~ maya angelou

"it's better to fail in originality than to succeed in imitation." ~ herman melville

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her hair bled purple

June 7, 2020

FREE WRITING

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maybe it was her laugh, like a bubbling glass of champagne
or maybe it was the wine color of her chipped manicure,
as if she cared enough about her appearance to try,
but not enough to let it consume her.
maybe it was the way her lips caught the light just so,
always cherry red, always product free.
maybe it was the way her raven hair
blew in the wind, swirling into clouds and dreams,
leaving purple inkblots across a blank page,
leaving it teeming with thing to be said.
maybe it was the way her eyes shone with sadness as
she grasped my hand for the last time, long nails leaving
a warm trail from the base of my index finger to my wrist.
maybe it was the way my pulse faltered before she turned silently,
crimson footprints trailing behind her, staining the snow,
flakes catching in my eyelids, thick winds whipping my breath away.
maybe it was a combination of those things.

but i loved her.
and she left me.

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10 Comments
  • Deleted User

    This is wonderful! Your descriptions are so vivid and I can paint a picture of the characters in my mind. Outstanding work from an outstanding writer! :)


    6 months ago
  • happy butterfly

    Replying:oh ok,that makes sense.Hope you get inspired soon.I know it sucks.I know you'll write something amazing soon<3


    6 months ago
  • happy butterfly

    Wow this is so incredible!
    I saw on someone's piece you said you had writers block?excuse me,this is your writers block?lol*says this joking not in rude way*lol me trying not to come off as rude.But seriously, you painted such great imagery just .....


    6 months ago
  • Deleted User

    Replying- Yes of course, you can use my piece as inspiration if you decide to use it. It’s really sweet of you. I’m excited to see your entry to the competition <3


    7 months ago
  • Anne Blackwood

    Replying: Thank you! Inner Strength is at least better than the placeholder in my Google Docs, which is Chronicles of the Mystery Disease. The only thing about it that makes me shy away from it is it kind of feels like the title to a poem/poetic piece rather than a short story/narrative.


    7 months ago
  • poetri

    oh mia this is incredible. i have no words :)


    7 months ago
  • Tushar Mandhan

    Oh...........the description!!! It's so beautiful.


    7 months ago
  • The Campbell's Kid

    Ok.... your work is AMAZING! That description and mystery actually took my breath away! Great job! You’re an awesome, awesome writer!


    7 months ago
  • joella

    wow!! I don't know if this is fiction or not, but either way, it's beautiful :)


    7 months ago
  • Charisse Marison

    Oh my gosh, I love all the descriptions! It painted a picture in my mind, and I love when writers do that! Great job :)


    7 months ago