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I like how the narrator is warning, like 'don't come to close', I think that is a really great way to write this. It really sounds hurt, and it turned out so beautiful.
maybe diving into why the narrator is feeling what he/she is feeling, if you know what I mean
This is a really beautiful poem! I enjoyed reading it all the way through. You're an amazing writer, keep up the good work :)