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I really like the poetic language used in this piece. Also, I like the ending; it is so thought-provoking!
Consider removing all punctuation and changing all letters to lowercase (the word I can be left capital or changed to lowercase). Either that, or add some more capital letters and puctuation.
Tip: in a poem like this, where a large letter at the beginning just seems out of place, you can click the beginning and press enter, making an empty line at the beginning. If you like the large "I", you don't need to do this.
Great poem. You are very talented.