bambiamby

Australia

big dreamer
bookworm
libra
marine studies
ravenclaw
dauntless

Message from Writer

“holding tight, denying the fact that eventually we all had to let go.” — Maggie Stiefvater, Linger

"To live every day as if it has been stolen by death, that is how I would like to live." -- Garth Stein, The Art Of Racing In The Rain

i love you but you never notice.. it's better this way #BaringMySoul3

May 3, 2020

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you never notice, but i smile whenever you get up and do your goofy 'happy dance'
my heart skips a beat just hearing your laugh; seeing your smile
i laugh quietly when you tell a stupid joke, even though you were talking to someone else
i love the way your eyes turn lighter when you're happy
that i hold a breath i never know I'm holding when you get tackled down to the ground playing football
you see,
whenever you have troubles you come to me, and i feel so special
you see me for who i am, and you care
i study harder now so that i can get into the same university as you
i stay up late nights to drive 'drunk-you' home from parties
i am willing to sacrifice anything and everything for you...
but you don't notice.
you never notice, but my heart dies a little seeing you kiss another girl
that it's harder for me to smile when you talk so admirably about someone else
that you're slowly tearing me apart.
but you don't notice.

it's better that way
 

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12 Comments
  • ek503

    This piece is awesome! So sad but so well written. Also, thank you so much for your support! It means a lot to me :)


    8 months ago
  • Tushar Mandhan

    Q n A answers-
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/163796/version/322545


    8 months ago
  • Madelyn (Carolina Girl)

    This almost made me tear up. It is so beautiful but so sad.


    8 months ago
  • .amelia.

    Noo! It's so sad :( She's so selfless but he doesn't see it :p (tell me if I mixed the genders up). And somehow she still finds it in her heart to see him loving someone else :p

    PS, thx for all the encouraging comments and likes :) best of luck for this comp!


    8 months ago
  • Chloe :) <3

    Hey! Firstly this is absolutely beautiful. Secondly thank you so so so much for all the beautiful heartwarming comments on ALL off my pieces!! It was just like wow! Anyways my most recent 'piece' is not really a piece but rather offering free reviews/comments so if you want one just put the link to which piece in the comments :) after reading this I hope you do because I'd be excited to read it!!


    8 months ago
  • ava09 (angels, auroras and sad prose #holidayvibes)

    This is beautiful and heartbreaking and I love it. <3


    9 months ago
  • joella

    my heart is breaking vicariously...this is so sweet <3


    9 months ago
  • Ree Sethu

    Replying: Thanks a million Bambie, for reading my works AND complimenting me! Lots of Love! I LOVE your works, as well <3


    9 months ago
  • Ezinne Clare

    This piece broke my heart. I love it <3


    9 months ago
  • Anne Blackwood

    This is so gooood *cries*


    9 months ago
  • WhispersOfGray

    This...made me cry. I love this, heartbreaking yet beautiful. <3 Thanks for entering the contest <3


    9 months ago
  • Ree Sethu

    Aww..It melted my heart, Bambie..<3


    9 months ago