Samina

India

Common girl with uncommon dreams.
Perspiration always turns to perfection :-)
Youtuber
Capricorn
Hopeless Romantic
Poet????

Message from Writer

Go and check out
Tushar Mandhan, or else I will steal your chocolates :P I don't have words for him.
Pure heart, Mishthi Sharma, V-Rose and EliathRose
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PLEASE COMMENT AFTER READING; THEY MEAN A LOT TO ME
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CHECK OUT THIS AMAZING INFORMATIVE PIECE
https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/187
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"Paper is more patient than man" ~ Anne Frank
“You don't get to choose if you get hurt in this world...but you do have some say in who hurts you. I like my choices.”-John Green
“And in that moment, I swear we were infinite.”-Stephen Chbosky
“I want you to be the very best version of yourself that you can be.”- Lady Bird
“I am a mess"-Elio

I feel... #PrettyContest 2 #ollie1stcomp

May 29, 2020

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i feel s u f f o c a t e d,i feel c h o c k e d
i can't bear expectations,
your thoughts have had my heart broke.
i cant m o v e , i feel p a r a l y s e d
your perfect dream for me
snatched away mine
i can't f e e l , i feel h o p e l e s s
your hurts are so deep
that i can't heal-they are e n d l e s s
i can't l i v e , i feel b r o k e
you have put me in a cage look
how hard i try my thoughts C
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                                                 O
                                                 C
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Word count 124
Grammar, lowercase, and format intentional
  Date completed 2 May 2020

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12 Comments
  • Deleted User

    The results for my comp are out!
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/174749/version/349514


    5 months ago
  • Mishthi Sharma

    The formatting is awesome. It add new dimension to the words.


    6 months ago
  • Fatima Zahra

    "your perfect dream for me, snatched away mine" amazing.


    6 months ago
  • Deleted User

    this is amazing:) Thank you for entering!


    6 months ago
  • Chloe :) <3

    This piece really got to me! It hurt its so sad! An amazing piece as are all of your pieces!


    6 months ago
  • Charisse Marison

    So beautiful and sad. Incredible work!


    7 months ago
  • bambiamby

    so well written, beautiful format and phrasing


    7 months ago
  • WhispersOfGray

    Yes, this describes exactly how I feel right now.


    7 months ago
  • ElsaRee

    Such a marvellous work! <3


    7 months ago
  • WhispersOfGray

    I love this!


    7 months ago
  • Tushar Mandhan

    Ohh...now I get it better. The formatting the poem is stunning!


    7 months ago
  • CrazyNinjaKid

    deep


    7 months ago