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It's the final countdown to the end of the world! I'm writing love poetry! Do do doot do! Do do doot doot do!
You said in a really cool way that feeling of not wanting to grow up, wanting childhood to stay on. It is a very interesting poem because so many love poems are about pain. Fantastic job, I really liked it.
I think including some more, maybe, feelings. It is great as is, but a lot of it is about material things, so if you included some more feeling type things that would be awesome.
Overall, this piece is unique, amazing, and beautiful. I really, really, like it.