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Update (11/16/20): Hey, I'm considering entering this to the Scholastics. Feedback in the comments and/or reviews would be much appreciated!
Literally everything about it. But specifically, I do love the repetitive structure of the stanzas, and how nicely the poem comes together. I also love the title.
Aside from a few little things I wrote in the highlights, I can't think of anything!
Good luck with Scholastics, this poem is amazing! Obviously, my suggestions are just suggestions and you're the author. Awesome job on this :)