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hi hi hi i’m gonna fuck around and post my favourite poems i wrote during escapril i think ??? that might be fun, so here we go !!
I love your imagery so much! Actually, the imagery in every piece you publish here is superb. There's nothing I can really say to give you feedback on it other than that, because it's already great. Also, I love how you conveyed the feeling of the moon through your words.
I think you could possibly expand it by adding more emotional feeling to the character, and you could also lean into the imagery even more to really help your readers feel the mood of the piece. Why is the character laughing, singing, and shouting? Is there some way you can help readers feel this? However, it's very nice as it is, and maybe it's best to keep it short and sweet. The repetition in it almost gave me a feeling of deja vu, and that's actually a similar feeling to what the moon gives me, so I enjoyed reading it. :)
This review is for the #Q&AContest that you won back in January or February or something... my reviews are shamefully late, but better late than never, right? Anyway, I'll try to get them all to you pretty soon. Your writing is so good that I don't know if I'll be able to give you helpful feedback, but I'll do my best. :)