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This piece is simplistically sweet, heartwarming, and leaves the readers smiling. I love your use of figurative language, from your metaphors to personification, adding to the imagery and descriptions to the piece beautifully.
When editing, perhaps changing the beginning of the few of your lines. Multiple lines start with "your" which was slightly repetitive and distracting, so perhaps just rewording or picking different words for the beginning. If you wanted to expand or add detail anywhere, maybe why you two were on the bridge. You say, "we met over the bridge" perhaps adding detail asking why or how it came to be? A little more background?
Great work! Keep writing!