Peer Review by wordsmith (United States)

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you are my backbone

By: mia_:)


FREE WRITING

you are my backbone,
a splint that keeps me upright against
the rising tides.
you are my tendons and ligaments,
as everything i do, every move i make
is for you, is in your image.
you are the cartilage between my vertebrae,
for without you i'd rub myself raw, snapping 
my spine in half,
splintering in two.
but you're here, and my spinal cord
shouts with glee, for with you around me,
i truly feel safe.

haha, science class XD

Peer Review

I like the imagery and connection to bones The poetry structure is really smooth and flows well


I would like more information about the relationship between the persona and who they are addressing.


Reviewer Comments

Good job! Keep up the awesome work :)