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est. march 5, 2020

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桜梅桃李

"i rebel, therefore i exist." ~ albert camus

"be a rainbow in someone's cloud." ~ maya angelou

"it's better to fail in originality than to succeed in imitation." ~ herman melville

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you are my backbone

May 12, 2020

FREE WRITING

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you are my backbone,
a splint that keeps me upright against
the rising tides.
you are my tendons and ligaments,
as everything i do, every move i make
is for you, is in your image.
you are the cartilage between my vertebrae,
for without you i'd rub myself raw, snapping 
my spine in half,
splintering in two.
but you're here, and my spinal cord
shouts with glee, for with you around me,
i truly feel safe.
haha, science class XD

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7 Comments
  • Mishthi Sharma

    very well written!
    And oh biology! I miss it.....


    5 months ago
  • Tushar Mandhan

    Reading a poem with biology adds to my life XD


    5 months ago
  • Ghoulgirl2020 (#Queenie's Halloween | I have been called Cool before if you know what I mean) ;)

    Wow. I really love this. Good job!


    6 months ago
  • Madeline Harper

    Wow, this is such a fresh and exciting way to write about feeling safe with someone and trusting them. Every single one of your poems is beautiful. Thank you so much for all the lovely comments you’ve left on mine! :D


    6 months ago
  • outoftheblue

    I love this sciency imagery!


    6 months ago
  • Dmoral

    "and my spinal cord / shouts with glee,"
    this matches the concept and is such interesting imagery i can't help but love it.!


    6 months ago
  • Ruthh

    ‘without you i’d rub myself raw’ is such a cool line I love it so much!


    6 months ago