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Message to Readers
I'm not that good at poetry. So any tips or ways I could grow will help out a lot! Thank you!
Peer Review
I love this piece! It's cohesive, the analogy isn't forced, and it tells a story very nicely.
The only line I would reword is the last line of the second stanza.