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Message to Readers
small-town blues & big city dreams
This piece is great! It really shows the narrator's anger about how she/he can't get stuff right, and is upset that they moved.
It would love to know why the narrator has trouble with math, and why they don't have any friends at their new school
Wonderful piece. Next time try and have each line start out with a capital letter.