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far too nonchalant about things i should probably care about
reviews pLeAsE. reviews without anything constructive are honestly a waste of your time, more than anything. be harsh or whatever when you critique me, but please do.
as for comments, they help a lot lol so if you drop a few, it would be highly appreciated.
Written By: agustdv
April 26, 2020
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3 Comments
rainandsonder
i've never heard a graveyard described as "soothing" before, that's such an interesting use of language. i really love this poem!
OpalDove
i love this. it's so goooooooooood! MMMMM how do you do it
Dmoral
"there is a black hole / at the end of this tragedy;"
ahhh, where the title comes in and makes sense ;)
"where the suns die, and all / sob tales come to an end. "
interesting...i love it, favorite lines^^