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I love the description of the sky in the beginning. It felt very magical and peaceful. I also love the general idea of the piece because I can totally relate.
I just love the ways you described the stars at the beginning and end of the poem and I wonder if you could incorporate that sort of thing into other parts of the poem as well. I would also like to know what causes you to go to nature for comfort? I don't know if you purposely left this out or not but I just think it might be an interesting thing to include in a revision.
I love this poem so much! Keep writing because this is amazing!