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Message to Readers
I should first explain that I'm not a fan of writing myself as first person. Hence, Hannah.
So, about the soulmates part, it's about me and this guy who ended up in a different school. (Long story short he's super smart and my grades weren't good...)
But enough about my story. Do read on :)
I loved the girl Hannah's character! Literally could feel as though I knew everything there was to her! Awesome job!!
I think it would be great to make a part two and evaluate this guy Lyre's character, but from Hannah's side still. Gives us an insight to who he really is by extending this.