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Ah, I'm not very good at peer reviews but I'll try :P Ok, so, uh, I feel like your interpretation of the tunnel and how the walls keep you in is quite nice. I can understand how you feel and I sometimes feel the same way in my life. I also think your ending was a nice way to finish because you had a sudden change instead of just sticking to the same mood and thoughts.
No, I think the way you wrote this poem sounds lovely :)
"Because the future is something I want to see." I can truly relate to this, as it is something I have thought about as well.
I'm quite sure you won't be drafting this anymore, but I think this is a wonderful poem that has memorable content. Parts of this poem have vivid descriptions, and others trigger me to feel in the moment.