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It's a beautiful little poem that looks at the pain and struggle of solving math problems and the sheer joy at reaching a wonderful result. I also appreciated the really smart thing you did with the first line of each stanza: the lamentations throughout the solving of a theorem is all too familiar having gone through something similar in high school. Overall, very lovely write that accurately depicts the love you have for mathematics and the process of finding a proof.
I wonder what you were proving? It seems to be immensely difficult needing to be done on a computer. And I wonder what went through your mind to come to that solution?
Lovely little poem with wonderful grammar. I really don't have much to say about your piece except that it demonstrates grit and perseverance in solving math problems and a witty little beginning line. Overall, a job well done. Here's hoping to see more from you in Write the World in the future. :)