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This piece is heartbreaking and sorrowful, raw and emotional. Every line seems written in pain but done so naturally that it furthers shows how sorrowful it is. The narrator is obviously trying to find themselves and have the world around them accept who they are. And I love how they take every person important to them and give each family member their own paragraph. This gives us insight to the life they're living and how they're viewed by others. Also, beginning with the quotes about what they are saying is brilliant because we hear in their own words the harsh and heartbreaking comments and then you analyze it underneath then state your mind.
If you were to expand, the only thing I feel as though you could also mention is friends. What they have to say or their opinions. It would just give us more insight into the people around you and their thoughts. I liked the consistency of starting off each paragraph/section with a quote, however, this is thrown off by the last one. Therefore, maybe adding one? Only since that's your more independent and empowering part, you could use your own words and quote.
Great work! Keep writing!