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I really love the emotion in this. Your frustration at your family, not accepting you for who you are is so evident in this page. I feel that you are sick and tired of your family treating you like this. I hope that you believe it will get better for you in the future.
In the footnote, you say that you feel alone for being who you are. Could you expand on this perhaps as to how it feels to be alone? Do you think that you will feel less alone if you told them?
Reading this made me cry. I felt your pain and was able to relate it to my life. I feel that when something is well written I can take that piece and relate it to my own life. Helping me gain an emotional connection to the piece. I'm glad that you feel happy that you have come out online. I hope this happiness continues.