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a republish for ollie's comp!

a single tear can erase evidence of a memory | escapril2020-17 | #aprilaprilapril | #ollies1stcomp

May 25, 2020

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he sits in the corner,
head on his knees,
struggling to hold back tears.
his vision darkens,
a stratus cloud
over a once beaming sun.
a droplet of saltwater skates
from the corner of his eye,
dribbling down his face
and landing on a 
sepia page,
a photograph,
blossoming until it engulfs 
his face and spreads to that 
of his once smiling wife.
tossing the image to the floor,
he lets out a primal moan
that rocks the world.
 

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6 Comments
  • Stone of Jade

    Wow this is so heartbreaking! "Droplet of saltwater skates" That is such a beautiful way to describe tears


    6 months ago
  • elliem

    Reply pt. 2: Or, if you've already published it, just comment it with the link :) Excited to see what you've come up with!


    6 months ago
  • elliem

    Reply: Of course! Maybe just explain that you did so in the footnotes.


    6 months ago
  • Tushar Mandhan

    'sepia page' clever adjective! and the title is gorgeous


    6 months ago
  • V-Rose

    Replying: The word limit is the maximum amount of words allowed, although, if you go a little above, that is okay. There is no minimum, though.


    6 months ago
  • Deleted User

    Is this the piece for prompt 2? It's amazing! Thanks for entering:)


    6 months ago