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Woah. I'm honestly shocked by how amazing that was. It puts perfectly to words how a platonic breakup can be just as heartbreaking as a romantic one. Losing friends can be so difficult, and this piece is is so sad and relatable. I especially loved the last part.
I wish I could have added more comments, but I legit couldn't think of anything. It's written really well, and this style is very loose with grammar so there wasn't exactly much you should change.
My favorite detail was how you painted the friendship initially. It made me smile thinking back to my friendships and how amazing they were.
This is amazing. Never stop writing.