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Check out my Weekly Competition of Competitions:

For free peer reviews, check out:

In honor of 30 followers, I'm doing a Q&A:

Competition of the Week:


April 15, 2020


This is not a contest. If you comment your piece, following the rules below, then you are guaranteed a review. Make sure to read all of the rules before entering, to ensure that you get some well-deserved feedback on your writing.

Rules for Entering

1) Make sure to like this piece.
2) You must comment your piece(s) below.
3) Only enter one piece per comment.
4) If you want to enter another piece, wait a day, or wait until somebody else enters a piece. If you break this rule, and enter multiple pieces clumped together, I will not review pieces in that clump.
5) Since there is no limit to the number of people who can enter, if you want to enter more than two pieces, you must follow me.
6) Please do not enter the same version of the same piece more than once.
7) If you enter a piece, and then change it, you may enter the new version. The new version will be counted as a separate piece (no pun intended).
8) Format your comment with the title of your piece at the top, then a blank line (press enter twice), and then the link to your piece. If you want to write anything more on your comment, put a blank line (press enter twice), and then whatever you want to put. The following comment template may help:

Title of Piece

Link to version of piece to be reviewed

Any other stuff.

9) Please do not bug me about getting your piece reviewed already.

Other Important Notes

Don't expect to get a review soon after entering your piece. It might take me a short time, or a long time to get to reviewing your piece. Also, please be nice in the comments. If you don't put the title of your piece, as long you comment the link, I will review your piece. There is no deadline for entering. If you want a comment instead of a full review, put that in the "Any other stuff" part of your entry in the comments on this piece. If you don't specify that you only want a comment on your piece, I will expect that you want a full review.


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  • aralyn.kay

    PTSD (TW)


    8 months ago
  • ect.13

    Behind the Door [a working title] - Extract Four


    Thanks for this! I'm really struggling with the rest if this story at the moment so some feedback would be amazing!

    8 months ago
  • batman_is_a_cracker

    .Hopeless am I

    8 months ago
  • T r a l a l a

    "One Gunshot Away"

    8 months ago
  • Charisse Marison

    Heartbreak Weather Chapter 3: Dear Patience


    Thank you so much for doing this <3

    8 months ago
  • Legolas

    The Oracle:


    8 months ago
  • r|A|i|N

    "The Ups and Downs of J.K. Rowling's Lethal White"


    thank you!

    8 months ago
  • outoftheblue

    Thank you for doing this! You're a life saverr

    8 months ago
  • outoftheblue

    'Requiem For The American Dream'


    8 months ago
  • cherryn

    "On Edge"


    8 months ago
  • Ree Sethu

    Peter, dear Peter


    Thanks a million for doing this!

    8 months ago
  • SunV

    Title- connected in more ways

    Link- https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/164049/version/322229

    The piece is for the playwriting competition, so I would really like to know your opinion on the piece... Thanks

    8 months ago
  • Samina

    Hey could You please read my series

    Why I can't forget you. Part 1 and 2
    Thank you so much for doing this.

    9 months ago
  • Tushar Mandhan

    When my haemoglobin rusts


    Thanks in advance for the favour. I would love to know your views on the piece.

    9 months ago
  • elliem

    "Dawn of Fog And Glass: Chapter One"


    Thanks so much for doing this! I'm also doing something similar to this on my account right now, and I know how time-consuming it is, so I truly mean it when I say thank you. :)

    9 months ago
  • julia.vasyakin

    I don't really mind which one you review, if you will at all, maybe some of my poetry?
    Thank you for doing this!

    9 months ago
  • amazing grace

    Hungry chapter one

    9 months ago
  • Deleted User

    Man, looks like you're busy! I'd like a piece of mine reviewed. It's a little longer though, so I don't mind waiting, even for a long time! And thank you so much for hosting reviews! Perhaps you'll become a great editor someday? Anyways, thanks again! Here's my piece:
    HEADLINES FROM HISTORY | Part one: The Colosseum

    Any other stuff? Your personal feelings about the story. No sugar coating. The authentic you. If this just isn't your sort of story, lemme know! It will defiantly help me shape my craft. Thanks again! See ya!

    9 months ago
  • fatpanda

    three ways to kill a god and one way they'll do it for you


    thank you for doing this!

    9 months ago
  • Wynorrific

    a particle known as oblivion


    I know you don't have all the time in the world, but the deadline for the contest is tomorrow. I'll be submitting the final draft later that day, so if you want to just take a look now to spot errors, then write a full review in, I don't know, a week or a month or more, that'd be fine. This means a lot to me; thank you for the chance.

    9 months ago
  • HelpMe512

    no mama i am not your daughter i am your child



    9 months ago
  • ect.13

    Behind The Door [a working title] - Extract Two


    Thank you so much for this - it's really generous of you. Happy to review any of your pieces in return if you'd like :)

    9 months ago
  • mia_:)

    Thanks for doing this! Here's my piece for the spoken word comp:
    'roots of animosity'

    9 months ago
  • Cheshire Cat

    Sorry I think this is the correct version for planted

    9 months ago
  • Root

    In Which Heroes Fall And Villains Rise


    Thank you so much for doing this, it’s very kind!

    9 months ago
  • Cheshire Cat

    This is "Planted" thx

    9 months ago
  • Dmoral

    what if faeries were just guardian angels that didn't make the cut?


    please & thank you

    9 months ago
  • Anne Blackwood

    Thanks for the comment! So excited to get your review.

    9 months ago
  • batman_is_a_cracker

    Tru Hapynes


    Howdy. I really appreciate what ur doing here. Anyway, enjoy!

    9 months ago
  • Anne Blackwood

    Poetry Is


    Thank you so much!

    9 months ago
  • poetri

    my piece: you are a spectrum of light


    thank you for doing this, i rly appreciate it.

    9 months ago
  • Quarkoala

    I forgot to include this as a rule or note: first come first serve.

    9 months ago