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Message to Readers
Someone asked me what is unconditional love and I looked towards my mother.
I like how you personify the forces of nature, then put them to shame. It illustrates how Maa, is beyond compare and quite admirable that way, like a powerful being of sort. The way you bold and italicise the words really convey a certain sincerity of this poem. And somehow, (I can't figure out why :p) it sort of urges me to visualise the forces of nature. Yeah, and the enjambment somehow draws me in. Because, the voice of the kid is perfectly captured here.
Really, I think the poem is quite well done here. The personality of the kid (especially innocence), can be seen. It is also quite endearing to see how close mother and daughter are. The girl's mother must love her with all her heart, the girl can so easily say it transcends the magnitude and beauty f nature in general.
Well, this is just my analysis on your poem. I hope it'll give you a new angle of looking at your, and hopefully find some ways to improve! :)
P.S./Replying: I suppose I might've deleted that comment unintentionally. Sorry for any confusion I caused. :p