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Message to Readers
Someone asked me what is unconditional love and I looked towards my mother.
I believe that you perfectly captured the innocence and joy of a child -- the way you string your words together, filling them with snips of rhymes and other uses of figurative language is spectacular. I especially love the line "Shall I tell the moon / to leave behind its pride / Maa, your heart is much much bright." This piece definitely made me stop and think for a minute about my mother too, and about the wonderful things that mothers bring to the world. :)
I only have a few suggestions as this piece was so well put together, you truly have an eye for rhythm in poetry. Perhaps consider not capitalizing the first letter of each line as most of the lines that you have begin with a capital. Maybe capitalize only after the end of a sentence? I also have a few other minor suggestions (you'll find them highlighted throughout the piece), but feel free not to use any of them!
Awesome job! I really enjoyed reading this piece, it was really well done! :)