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I really love this! It leaves me with a feeling of pride and appreciation for the front-line workers, and it also shows just how lucky some people have it to not have to go to work. It gives me a greater sense of awareness for these heroes!
I feel like this poem could benefit from either stanzas or punctuation. It was confusing because I didn't know where it was supposed to break. Also, the size of the lines is all over the place. I think you should do longer lines for the most part, and only short lines to really accentuate emotions.
I loved the lines "Because there is no one/ on this earth/ that I's rather be mistaken for/ than my mother". It just is great way to show your love and appreciation for your mom.
I think this is an amazing poem! I love how much you appreciate your mom; it really warms my heart. Awesome work!
Tell your mom thank you for me, and I hope you all stay safe!