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Please, please, please take the time to review or comment. I am thinking of enteeing this in the poetry competition. What do you think?
I loved the "If these were" lines. They were all so beautiful and really helped me think about life and living in another way.
I think everyting was already amazing and greatly written. Just the only thngbis that some lines began capitalized and some didnt, if you fix that I think this will be perfect.
This was such a thought provoking and powerful poem on many levels! I commend you for writing this! Great job, and keep writing! <3<3<3