buddingauthor

India

15 years old and obsessed with Agatha Christie, Sherlock Holmes (both books and series), and Divergent.
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Please suggest any, absolutely anyyy good book you've read, Ill try and get on board!

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NO SPOTS LEFT! In fact, we have an extra comment. But I'll review their piece regardless.

FREE REVIEWS!!!!- NO MORE SPOTS LEFT!

April 11, 2020

FREE WRITING

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Hello everyone! Okay so I am enjoying the quarantine life but I do not want to rot my eyes just by watching Netflix. And to me, writing is very productive. So, I do write almost everyday now but I want to review some pieces. I am not at all a master reviewer or anything, but I want to write more so that I can learn to give constructive feedback.
So please comment down below some pieces you want me to review. And please have some mercy on me, so NO MORE THAN THREE PIECES PER PERSON.
And in total I would review the pieces for the first 20 people who comment because I am just starting out. I'll try and review them as soon as possible but bear with me if I am late. Also, if you like, please review some of my latest pieces, specially 'A New Experience'. Thank you! Go comment!

*Maybe if I am good at this and I am able to handle so many reviews, I'll extend the amount of people who comment, but lets start with twenty:)

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22 Comments
  • Dmoral

    thank you for the reviews!


    11 months ago
  • Quarkoala

    Review the following:
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/157356/version/307415
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/156557/version/305921
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/753/shared/155522/version/303863


    11 months ago
  • batman_is_a_cracker

    Howdy. I'm in need of some reviews and you're just handing them out like candy. So here goes nothing.
    Dominic Costard (incomplete 2/3): https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/155544/version/305522
    An Excerpt (not a full story, just a scene): https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/156612/version/306659
    deeply personal by jane (diary entries from a melodramatic teenager): https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/151579/version/295583
    Thank you for your service. Can I say that? Am I allowed to say that? Well, anyway, happy reviewing!


    11 months ago
  • sci-Fi

    Hi! It's really cool that ur doing this, so thank u so much!
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/139536/version/270908
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/155892/version/304732
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/139755/version/297540


    11 months ago
  • lindsmariebuck

    Thank you so much for offering to do this!
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/157767/version/308212
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/157555/version/307808
    Again thank you,


    11 months ago
  • Two Heartbeats

    I'd love a review on a Bouquet for My actress. Everyone's competitions pieces are so strong and I'd love to ham up my work


    11 months ago
  • Jasmine_K

    Okay so first off, thank you so much for doing this. I know that they can be draining to do sometimes and take up a lot of time!
    https://bit.ly/2y9yWcg
    If you don't feel comfortable doing this piece it's no worries at all, I know religion, blasphemy and religious imagery can be sensitive subjects.


    11 months ago
  • deep_breaths

    Thanks so much!
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/154768/version/303730
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/154653/version/302687
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/157507/version/307725


    11 months ago
  • agustdv

    Hello! Thank you for taking the time to do this! It means a lot!

    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/154963/version/302707
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/129484/version/249689
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/152513/version/299194

    again, thank you very much!


    11 months ago
  • Alexandra_Bertilsson

    Hello! I just wanted to start out by thanking you for this amazing opportunity for reviews- I know they’re long to complete and require through and a good reading, so again, thank you for doing this!
    I was wondering if you could review just this one piece I wrote- I want to extend it and try to animate it as a short story, so I’d like it to be as good as possible before I do that.
    Here’s the link: https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/142776/version/307929
    Thank you!!!


    11 months ago
  • Pavithra C.P

    Hi,
    Could you please review this piece for me-
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/156064/version/305732
    Thanks a LOT!!!


    11 months ago
  • jaii

    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/156664/version/306127
    tysm, you're an angel <3


    11 months ago
  • Anne Blackwood

    Thank yooouuuuu
    This one's a word vomit so I understand if you don't know what to do with it:
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/157136/version/307002
    This is for the competition so please help as much as you can:
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/156930/version/306624


    11 months ago
  • Wicked!

    This is so nice of you!
    I'd love some feedback on these pieces:
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/156405/version/305611
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/131387/version/287417
    Thank you so much for doing this :)


    11 months ago
  • poetri

    omg thank you this is incredible :)
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/156785/version/306374
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/156564/version/305972
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/147430/version/292064


    11 months ago
  • mia_:)

    Whoa! This is so nice! Thanks so much for doing this! Here are my pieces!
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/157050/version/306827
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/156454/version/306283
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/155063/version/302885


    11 months ago
  • Root

    Hi, this is really nice of you to do! I only have two works so far because I’ve literally never written poetry before, like, yesterday when I logged on, so you can choose to do whatever you want with them:

    In Which Heroes Fall And Villains Rise

    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/157205/version/307126

    A Silent Non-binary Protest

    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/157196/version/307112


    11 months ago
  • Fabiana250

    Hi! I hope everything's good where you are.
    I would love if you could review both of my short stories "The life they left us" and "Cave of fears"
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/154825/version/302388
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/152924/version/298735
    Thank you!! Have a nice day ;)


    11 months ago
  • Dmoral

    you're pretty awesome for doing this!
    could you please review:

    twilight keeper #everprompts3
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/155345/version/303479

    and

    "i miss my cocoa butter kisses" #Samina50
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/153445/version/300108

    and i'll definitely look into reviewing that piece for you!


    11 months ago
  • V-Rose

    Thanks for doing this!
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/156247/version/305281
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/148343/version/289151
    Thanks again!


    11 months ago
  • Samina

    Hey
    Could you plz review
    1.Writers Streak Week 2 Day 2
    2.Writer Streak Week 2 Day 3
    3.Writers Streak Week 2 Day 4
    I hope it isnt a too much.Thanks for free reviews!!:-)<3
    3.


    11 months ago
  • Tushar Mandhan

    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/153986/version/300930
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/152801/version/298465


    11 months ago