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I’m very new with poetry so any advice is very greatly appreciated!
This piece is about who would rise up to take the place of heroes, if heroes were no longer there.
The structure of this piece is very strong; it isn't just random. It's almost prose, but not quite.
Why wasn't the hero fighting for the greater good, and why didn't the hero want to save the day? What did the hero want? I'm sure there's some reason for this; I just don't see it.
Also, in your next draft, I suggest you make a decision between capitalizing the beginning of every line, or only capitalizing the beginning of every sentence.
This is a very strong poem, with a very strong perspective. Great job!