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I finally did it!!!!! I wa ted to join the writing streak challenge all week but online school just won't give me a break. I hope everyone is safe and keeping gheir spirits up.
I like how you describe the isolation you feel, and I can tell how much you long to go outside. The imagery is very vivid, and I love the description of the sound outside. I also appreciate that you used more than a few senses; i really immerses the reader.
There's a few sentences I would change, and a few grammar errors, but other than that I think this really well written.
I was going to review one of your poems, but I'm not too good at reviewing poetry. I really liked this piece!