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This book seemed to really have an effect on you, and it shows in your writing. Keep up your passion, keep writing, and your ideas will continue to become clearer and more powerful.
Towards the end, your arguments get particularly passionate. I have marked a few places where I would need to hear a little more to be convinced - but I know you could get me there - and I look forward to reading another draft to see where you decide to take it.
Thanks for sharing this piece,