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Message to Readers
Most of my life been all lies and it very upsetting for me to find out that I wasn’t never happy but maybe this time I will
I could sense all the feelings you put in your writing while I was reading this. It was really moving and inspiring, you know, many people are afraid to show themselves as they are for so many reasons and this piece encourages everyone to be themselves.
I would like to know (if you don't mind) what's the real you? You could've maybe included more about your real self in your work, so we can understand as readers what are the changes you're making. Besides, when you mentioned that you'll hide your feelings, I think that it could be good if you explained the reason.
Overall, this was very moving. I'm glad you finally accepted yourself. I've read other of your pieces and I can tell you're talented. Keep writing!