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Message to Readers
Any feedback is welcome!
My feeling at the end was: at the end of a long journey, I finally have hope.
In your next draft, consider describing more of the scenery in this poem using comparisons.
"that the fireflies became satellites"
This is such a creative line, with very unusual choice of words.
As you are revising, remember what you want the pome to feel like overall, because the overall feeling of the poem right now is very well done.
Consider changing capitalization and puctuation in your next draft, because currently, it seems a bit random.