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Message to Readers
This poem is calling for change; calling for us to accept one another.
Talk about the tree more.
"as if they are looking in a mirror?"
This shows how similar people are, especially those who are mad at one another for being different. At least, that's how I understand it. A brilliant line.
Keep the tone there, the strong voice behind the poem is awesome!
Consider, in your next draft, having the poem broken up into stanzas. Right now, it is a bit hard to read. Also, consider getting rid of the big W, by adding a blank line before it (click on the very beginning of the poem and press enter).
I really appreciate pieces to review, but when entering them, please try to do it in the correct format (stated in the rules).