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The last 2 stanzas of this poem were really beautiful because the writers solitude is captured very well and the imagery is used quite well.
I would like the writer to expand on those feelings of being small and the significance of the galaxy and nature. I would also reconsider the use of rhyme because it doesn't contribute to the poem, it distracts the reader from the beauty of the words. Don't completely abandon it but don't continuosly use it either.
Really good poem