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The opening two lines were very striking and caught my attention . The speaker was justifying herself first of all with "I'm not a neat freak" but proceeded to call out Nicheal on the discovered lipstick .
Perhaps comparing some more on their past relationship. Was there any indication beforehand he was cheating ? Ect.
Where did you get the inspiration ?
Is the speaker truly heartbroken or would she have eventually drifted from Micheal also ?
Why did she not break up with Michael when she witnessed him cheating in the first place ?
I really enjoyed it and as a whole I think its very well put together and cleverly written . If this was a taster of your work I would look into more.