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I liked the message at the end of the piece, I feel like it wrapped up the idea/concept very well. I enjoyed how she was realizing her self worth and mow far she should go. The way the narrator talked about love and how the girl was so hopeful, almost desperate, for it was interesting. I feel like many girls out there could relate and understand an aspect of this.
If you were to deepen this piece, perhaps where the main girl obtained this idea or thoughts about a "special kind of love". Like, who does she look up to that has a love she wants? When it comes to details, maybe just giving her name? It got a little confusing when everyone was referred to as "boy", "girl", "he" "she", "her" his".
Good job! Keep writing!