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Message to Readers
A quick heads up: this is the second part of a longer story that I'm writing - for a bit more context, you might want to read the first one too. You can find it on my page :)
Thanks so much for taking the time to read my work. I'll read and take into account any feedback - any of your thoughts are welcome!
I was surprised that the door led to another library -- you did a very good job describing exactly how it looked as well, building up the suspense in a way that had me clinging to each of your words! Again, I also like the dialogue that you've included!
Perhaps I would add at some point maybe some specific information about the protagonist's background just so that we get to know who she is as a character? But that's just a smaller point, as you did a really good job and I can't quite think of anything else to add.
Nice job again -- I'm excited to see what kind of books are in the library/why the library is there!