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I guess the whole "monster" thing had me intrigued the whole time, it was very suspenseful and you wrote it very well so that the reader is really involved in the whole story. Plus the end had a whole plot twist that really put the bow on the present or however you say it.
uhhhh the only thing I can think of is maybe have a sequel where the girl and the monster become better friends although I do really like where you ended off and you included all of the important details to the story like the pillows and the introduction of her mom. This story is interesting because it takes place mostly at night and it doesn't delve (is that even a word) into the girl's school life but I like that about it because school isn't really important to the story. I think everything about what you did was perfect!
This is probably my favorite story of yours!! You did everything perfectly and there was so much impeccable imagery that made me really feel like I was in the story, and then the suspense throughout the entire story had me hooked with the amazing plot twist at the end. Greatttt job <3