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don't overthink it. i really do mean everything i wrote in this piece though. growing up sucks and it's tough, here are some of the rough patches. but yeah. i was feelin' pretty nostalgic while writing this piece, but hey- can u blame me?
I really like how this piece demonstrated the hardships of growing up. You did a fantastic job with contrasting the two time periods, and this style works really well for this subject! I loved this.
There was a few places where the phrasing could be better, but all in all this is incredibly well written. I wish I could give you more suggestions but honestly, I can't really think of much else.
Nice job! I really enjoyed reading this!