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Zoe

Australia

Just another girl trying to find her way in the world and using writing to help

Message to Readers

This is my first poem so I don't blame you if you think it was terrible! You can be as harsh as you want criticism-wise but only if you are telling me how I can improve it!!!
Thanks!!!

Wild Love

April 20, 2015

PROMPT: WILD

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WILD.

The way the sun sparkled in his eye,

the way he told me our love would never die,

WILD.

The way he grabbed me by the hand,

and said that we owned this land,

WILD.

The way he whispered in my ear,

something I never wanted to hear,

WILD.

The way I felt when he left me, 

like the world was crashing down around me,

WILD.

The way I thought that he actually loved me,

but we were young and it was just a fantasy,

WILD.

The way I never thought I would find someone else,

who would love me in a way that was a little bit less

WILD...

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  • Suri Purefoy

    This poem is SO beautiful, Zoe! I love the words you used and the way you used them. Keep writing! It's amazing!!!


    over 2 years ago