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Actual review: These guiding questions aren't really helping me with the review and so I am not going to be using them much. I'm going to help you though. This is only the beginning. Though, I am very impressed with how you opened it. It is beautifully written, and I can definitely say that you sound like you're going in the right direction. . . however I'm not sure what the direction is. I look forward in seeing this essay completed. Remember to fulfill the guided questions. There wasn't much to say because there wasn't enough to read. I believe you are more than capable. Good luck and happy writing.