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I loved the descriptions of this. This is incredible! I love how the transition from your birthplace to Hong Kong is made. Dubai and Hong Kong sound so different and as someone who has been to both the places, you have captured their descriptions perfectly! Also that last line blew my mind. Great job!
I would like to know more about how Hong Kong made you feel. You have written about how it is through your eyes, but it would help the reader connect more if you could describe a bit about how it made you feel.