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Message to Readers
I know this is kinda sloppy; I've never written anything like this before. If anyone can help make it communicate better, that would be much appreciated.
This piece is a representation of what many girls feel. They know they're pretty, they want to believe so, but sometimes it's hard to believe since the society has some beauty standards, and to be honest, not all of us girls fulfill those expectations. The way you could express yourself and this problematic was great. There are some rhymes in there that I really enjoyed while reading since they made this poem smoothlier to read (I don't know if you get me).
I think you should try to organise your ideas a bit so your ideas don't confuse your readers because, for example, I don't understand quite good if sometimes you don't feel good with your body, or your face, or both of them. Maybe you could focus on one of those aspects or if you want to include both, give them an order. It would be interesting to see your perspective about this (society beauty standards), so perhaps you could include it more conspicuously in the poem.
I could definitely relate to this poem. You did a great job for someone who never had written something like this before. Keep writing!