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Thank you, Madelyn (Carolina Girl), for the advice. I have changed the format. Hope you like it! :)
This is really what loss feels like. It always feels like it's moving to fast, like you want to go back. That is why this piece is so AMAZING. You captured the feeling in a way that makes people feel like their own loved ones are dying. It is just incredible.
No, not really. It was just awesome.
Listening to Pentatonix, they are the best and I love that detail.
This piece is the best! I love it and it is incredible.